P1: Behavior can be molded by teaching
P2: Negative reinforcement is a part of behavior
P3: Negative reinforcement is the removal of something
P4:Negative reinforcement increases a behavior to occurP5:Reinforcement is used to strengthen behavior
C: Negative reinforcement is a way to strengthen a behavior to occur again
It seems to me like your premises are repetitive. Premises one and two seem to have the main point of what you want your essay to be about, but then three, four and five all just say the same thing you have already said with different words. I think it would be smart to check over your premises and see if either you can build off of the first two, or come up with a few new premises that are not so closely related to the ones you have already created.
ReplyDeleteI think I get what your saying. And wonder where this subject is coming from. But I wonder if your concept is associated with cognitive development and how people learn. This reminds me of Blooms Taxonomy and also the study of Gardner's multiple intelligences.
ReplyDeleteHey Sam thanks for the help i actually deleted that last three premises that i had becasu eit was repetive.
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